a charity event:in the school is a movement that calls FOC!! in the camps are market solidadary!! this money goes to africa And a lot of money is extracted!! each one buy many things and sell in the market other foc!!
Hi Mamen Thanks for sending in this assignment. This is a good start. Please remember, however, to use the guidelines that are provided in the Student's Book and the workbook when you write your assignments. It's important to develop your ideas a little bit more. Here are my corrections:
(a) A charity event (:) AT (in) the school is a movement (that calls) CALLED FOC!! (in)AT the camps WE SET UP A (are) SOLIDARITY market (solidadary!!) This money goes to africa and a lot of money is (extracted)RAISED!! EVERYONE (each one) buyS many things and sellS THEM in the NEXT FOC market (other foc)!!
Hi Mamen
ReplyDeleteThanks for sending in this assignment. This is a good start. Please remember, however, to use the guidelines that are provided in the Student's Book and the workbook when you write your assignments. It's important to develop your ideas a little bit more. Here are my corrections:
(a) A charity event (:) AT (in) the school is a movement (that calls) CALLED FOC!! (in)AT the camps WE SET UP A (are) SOLIDARITY market (solidadary!!) This money goes to africa and a lot of money is (extracted)RAISED!! EVERYONE (each one) buyS many things and sellS THEM in the NEXT FOC market (other foc)!!